poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on my fucking dad by timvick473662003.

http://mulberryfairy13 Sep 2003

I like the detachment (dissociation) when you say "watching your dad beat you"- but I didn't like it as much toward the end, I couldn't really believe that the narrator would be able to be so remorseless about his/her mother's death.