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ReplyTo a comment on Facial Bliss by ARTIE.

?-Dave_Mysterious-?17 Oct 2003

Savory display is a totally bodacious line to end a haiku with. However, the previous lines do not do it justice. I suggest something like:

Oh, such tasty treats,
Sausage rolls and cheese pasties,
Savory display.