poetandknowit21 Oct 2003
The fact that Z has to send/post a picture of the event for the poem to really to take hold hurts the poem. Maybe you could give the reader just a bit more to make it make sense of what and why it (i.e. âNatureâ is being said. I am afraid that the name just doesnât cut it. Of course, I am sure hatterâs hare will disagree, but what does she know, she only drinks pilsner. I think we get that idea when we look at the picture, but alone I think the poem fails. Initially I was afraid you had holed up in the john with a tattered copy of âIron Johnâ.