poetandknowit21 Oct 2003
I disagree with you and hatter's hare. Bub and Richa I think fall into the same category, although the bub utilizes more concrete language. Their poems are fragmented. Well thought out in their heads, but incomplete at times on paper. You can disagree all you want, but the fact is the picture makes the poem make sense. Look at some of the other comments. We donât know who Toku is thus the exuberance is nil. You simply mentioning a name and screaming out NATURE in my mind doesnât complete the poem or capture completely the rawness of the moment. With the picture I see who this guy is and the body langue in the photos, etc, etc, that isnât in the poem. The image could be more complete.