abecedarian24 Oct 2003

Harmonic in its dissonance. Interesting, I like this description a great deal. It is a simple indication of an unresolved but accepted complexity.

My reading suggests the following change:
'a chorus harmonic in its six-legged dissonance,
never completely soothing the restlessness inside'

The second line reemphasizes the first I think (as opposed to contradicting it with a 'but').

Or maybe my reading was wrong - as can do.