poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on I AM... by CHUNMOON.

Shuushin16 Nov 2003

STOP THE SHOUTING.

horrey cow. The last three lines gel very nicely, but I can't help thinking there's a more forceful way to make this case.

Most of the power is lost in heat (as is often the case).

It almost pushes through though...

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