Shuushin20 Nov 2003

Excellent handle :O)

The poem...

"It keeps us human in our minds
And whispers to us sweet reminds" is very nice

"Then would I feel emotion true
Or would emotions grow askew?" is a not so nice (*very*) difficult to pull off questions, especially in first person).

As a lyric is flows along well enough with the usual disclaimers, but i think you might be better served to make the same observations from another perspective and make it a poem.

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