Caducus24 Nov 2003

Patina - cool word like it

Thes people are fused by self = typo in line

Found this absorbin i/t ! I know i'm looking in to this too deep but the line - high class in to deep atlantic made me think.

High class people are deemed to be shallow, cold water is deep, can you find the antonym?

Other than that it was all hits in the right places and it's a very layered poem - 8 = B+ = :0)