Shuushin25 Nov 2003

interesting.

I have pause with this bit:
"This fathom
My fathom underneath " - was this intentional; the abruptness and lack of punctuation with the next line capped makes me scratch my head.

the line with edible dirt has a very nice impression to it.

not sure what to make of this one, but generally I'm the happier for it.

have a sideways infinity (and yes, I have that line in something already)

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