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ReplyTo a comment on The Vagabond by Caducus.

INTRANSIT31 Dec 2003

Something for a nothing in everyones' nowhere. Brilliant. Small nits. I would make the leaves and wind
whos, they are accompanyment to the man. I don't like the duplicitous rain, unless it has specific meaning, explain? (Crib)is slang for house in America find something else please. I'm totally lost with the crownings. Sorry. "Jettison of the richer man" also brilliant. And I liked the use of mackintosh. I don't mind going to the dictionary at all. Even for this small stuff, the gross of it is velly goot, yah.