poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Fake Happiness by WithoutLife.

horus810 Jan 2004

Once, in the jungles of your asshole I battled the great beast 'Sumptin'. After severing its face from it's lower intestine I crawled out a new man, though wet and covered in smegma. So when you say "fuck my spelling" are you trying to take our focus off of you being a lazy retard, by convincing us that you make up for your lack of writing skills with 'feelings'? How do you expect to convey feelings to your audience of 0 if you can't even form the words to describe a feeling to fucking begin with? Perhaps, you'll send us all snap shots of you beating yourself into the shape of a poem with 'feelings' with a ten foot turd bat with your initials on the handle you nicknamed Beefer? Hack.