zodiac25 Jan 2004

Good call on the TO in the second stanza. I might risk losing my two - that's right, two! - 10s to change it. Otherwise all later readers will just have to consider it there. The immortal catechesis is a little odd, not a metaphor for poemranker per se, but a metaphor for growing up Catholic (and a serious one) with the expectation that being burned at a stake is better than, say, sitting on the hood of a car at night drinking Coronas.