poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Lullaby by Goad.

Goad27 Jan 2004

Yeah, I'm going to work on the war thing. As ajt discerned, it refers to an internal war, but I want that to remain an incidental detail, not a feature of the pome. It's character background.

how does "...from the last great struggle" sound? nah, silly. I mean last as in previous.

"...from my private wars"
"...from the last time I fought this"