poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Lullaby by Goad.

Goad27 Jan 2004

re. dream: you might be right. In my original conception, it isn't really about a dream, but referring to an experience of lucidity when your past life seems like a dream that you're waking up from, but I realize I didn't actually develop this idea in text so it's just in my head. I must decide either to ditch that idea or figure out how to bring it out in the pome.

similarly, the you/I mismatch was because it's all one person. But I realize I don't make that clear either. Damn.