horus89 Aug 2002

i wanted to give you a ten, but then your overall score would have sky rocketed.this is a pure crack in your skull.. truly..i see too much light for your age..i must humble you..i must humble myself..do i have to be a redmark too? yes, i think i do..(this little diddy is fuckingkiller) you win the HORUS 8 TEN THAT GOT A ZERO FOR NO GOOD REASON AWARD CUZ ITS TOO GOOD ..don't worry others will come and bring much fruit to your alter, and i predict this will be on the top fifteen list before any of mine(honestly i don't pay attention, really) trust me..i am a ranc-amateur with hardly any real grasp of creative writing, but fuckin aye i can clam like a mad man. this is a wonderfull poem???