babbit1112 Aug 2002

Ah zzinnia66, writer of triangle poems, my guide to the site, teaching me that a limerick is really a band with an extra "a", and that art of the absurdist (the literary style) poem, we finally meet again in the random file. I like this shape much better, but a few suggestions/questions. Is the article necessary in the first line? Have you tried the poem without the articles in the listing after the colon? Why the 'cross? I like stretched without the longer, but that is just my one dimensional self. Nitpicking I know, but with tightening this could be much better than geometry on a page.