darkshark7 Feb 2004

thanks for the advice...I'll look over it more
I agree with you on 'poke'...not the best word choice
It's a bit confused because I only wrote up one draft of it, and I was trying to be deeply metaphorical.
Ya know, having the crossing of the freezing water be life, and how it will not 'freeze over' because too much happens for it to ever stop, and the crossing it with someone's help is finding someone to live with, and then the watching the fire and fading bit....well, you get the idea