poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on before I forget by moonUnit.

lastobelus7 Feb 2004

I'm giving this an 8 too. It's not really an 8 for me now, but I think it has the potential to be a 10.

"I will be out" bothers me -- what, out of prison? out on your own? out for lunch? out of the office?

I agree with biteme that the cracks...red umbrella line is excellent.