poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on Taller Girl by lastobelus.

lastobelus8 Feb 2004

shit, I made it worse???? oops.

but teacher, the periods have a purpose! I'm drumming! It's not affectation if it's for a reason, is it? Ok, I confess, I'm reading him again.

Should I ditch almost all the cummingsesqueness but leave S.2. L.2 as it stands? can I get away with keeping S1L6 too? The rest I can concede as affectation, including the brackets, and happily toss.