Shuushin15 Feb 2004

crwncka1? I didn't think that last bit was too badly made...

It's a very dense prosaic style, but I can appreciate the use of language in it.

I wouldn't call it pretty, but certainly not an attemp at trickery.

That's what this poem is about then, about another poemranker poet? Yeah, about that... how's that whole "wounded schoolboy" thing workin for ya?

You have some good perspectives, why waste it on stuff like this?