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ReplyTo a comment on The Cry of Lorquine by MacFrantic.

Shuushin25 Mar 2004

nice title.

"but yet" - pick one (not but). Lie.

what made you think they were hopeless? What did that scene look like? Show me that.

Does the last line [of the poem] mean that the line, as in ancestry, was lost?

Lorquine is a type of butterfly, isn't it?