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ReplyTo a comment on I SHALL NOT by pitchblackdisaster.

poetandknowit17 Aug 2002

Do flames really burn beneath a fire or are the fire itself? Shouldn't this poem be called: I have a pimple, what to do, if I pop it, it will spew. All over the walls, all over the floor, and if it is a big one I just might hit the door. And don't listen to blake. His poetry also has acne.