poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on in the hands by halofriendly.

halofriendly22 Apr 2004

Eh, I just liked the imagery it gave me when I wrote it. The person is caught in darkness, seemingly never to wake up again and all they want is sunshine to stream in every window....I decided to use the verb "smear" to give a sense of sunshine being painted all over the room...