poemranker ::Replying

ReplyTo a comment on The Ultimate~Creep goes to Mecca! by Bachus.

<~>19 Aug 2002

yes. it definitely would sound better over a pint ot two. so long as we're talking on the telling of it, the bit about your dog disjoints, but not in an effective way. some sort of transition is needed to work it in literarily... like, another glass of ste. emillion, perhaps... miss me today? i sure as hell did. i like being outside, though, and i worked my ass off today.