<~>30 Apr 2004

the bleeding is very nicely done, aetius, and i like the analogy to amish tables but the words "polished clean through much erasure;" don't fitwith it--they trip them selves up. give them harder sounds to match the table's angles.

vomit--vomit. monsters unleashed--yesyes--

wild apples sewn by the mad--are you mad? why not the birds? why not by orchard-raiders chased off the land by athe tenant-farmer??

tame roses--ah, now that thorn soothes ,me. now you're back on track...