regarding some deleted poem...	tre 147.9.40.53	27-Apr-04/2:15 PM
Sounds like something I would write. I like it. Feels real
Re: Detroit by <{Baba^Yaga}>	SupremeDreamer 204.31.160.120	27-Apr-04/2:35 PM
Enjoyable read, though some of the wording seemed slightly irregular to me here and there- probably just me. Blessed with nine.
Re: Its the same old static & flaccid striptease. by SupremeDreamer	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	27-Apr-04/2:58 PM
It's not anti-women, it's anti-life, depressing. What's to write about if flesh and beauty are faded into subtlety - depression? I wish you could make what we do more appealing. Still not badly written.
Re: Under Trees by Caducus	DreamerSupreme 204.31.160.120	27-Apr-04/4:09 PM
I have just one nit-pick: "I held myself in my arms" Just curious, how exactly did you manage that? lol. Anyway, you have earning a blessing of seven.
Re: Love, Fair by MacFrantic	DreamerSupreme 204.31.162.8	27-Apr-04/4:26 PM
Perhaps you could use "sign" instead of statue.. I believe that would work.. but this piece doesn't really tickle my fancy at all. It does tempt me to write my own version of it including giant mushrooms and drunken horny gnomes, but then again, it doesn't irritate me enough to motivate my quill to create such a mockery.
Re: It's A Long Way From Heaven by Blindpoetry	zodiac 152.18.33.197	27-Apr-04/5:35 PM
"Colliding against my will of misfortune" is the main bad part. The rest is okay.
Re: saltwater bath by J.B. Manning	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	27-Apr-04/5:36 PM
How can the absense of something fill something? Absenteeism? Best lines: You found me running/ I saw you falling/ We collided
Re: Under Trees by Caducus	zodiac 152.18.33.197	27-Apr-04/5:40 PM
What an amazing selection of nude poems we have today. "the dryness of a brown circling tomb" is especially nice.
Re: Brush me away by nothingtoanyone	nothingtoanyone 63.191.17.75	27-Apr-04/5:44 PM
If you say that I have failed in the wrighting of this poem then why did you give it a -10-?
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	27-Apr-04/6:51 PM
I don't know if I was supposed to. But I got a nice chuckle out of the thing.
Re: exist by the indign	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	27-Apr-04/6:55 PM
This would be a nice piece with the self-pity dialed back maybe one notch. Quite a bit of good in it.
regarding some deleted poem...	wilco 24.176.102.131	27-Apr-04/6:57 PM
I likes it.
Re: Brush me away by nothingtoanyone	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	27-Apr-04/6:58 PM
"last piece of my" - what? again in l3 - this is on purpose, right? Why? oh - I see you've been informed already.
Re: Suicide over the course of a lifetime by GregDeEgg	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	27-Apr-04/7:09 PM
yep. U is crA-Z There should be a separate category for this kinda stuff.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	27-Apr-04/7:20 PM
I have been her in having little affection, then touched with wine and his lips, soon the swoon or swale, glorified fullness. A great feeling til the next morning, or having been spoofed again.
Re: exist by the indign	Shuushin 207.5.211.177	27-Apr-04/7:22 PM
just so you know I looked it up: in·dign - adj. Archaic. Unworthy. Obsolete. Shameful; disgraceful.
Re: It's A Long Way From Heaven by Blindpoetry	some deleted user 68.66.196.168	27-Apr-04/7:46 PM
I see the progress from infatuation to failure with a family in the way, but some lines are vague: "colorful aspects" "I hit the ceiling fan"
Re: saltwater bath by J.B. Manning	J.B. Manning 64.136.26.226	27-Apr-04/8:17 PM
The absense of sorrow fills my mind...meaning that sorrow is not present. I dunno, I worded it that way with the intention of suggesting that sorrow was there, trying to invade my thoughts, but I wouldn't let it.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.172.43	27-Apr-04/8:22 PM
Its ok, but then again, this sort of thing just isn't my thing... never-the-less take this blessing of eight and go in peace.
regarding some deleted poem...	SupremeDreamer 204.31.172.43	27-Apr-04/8:42 PM
Finally I will be able to prove that you ranker folk are ugly deformed freaks who are completely bloated with fat rolls drowning anyone foolish enough to come within three feet of the blubber shoreline.