Re: Alone Together by lynnkyle	NanceXToo 24.229.216.168	31-Jan-04/1:00 PM
I think it could work either way
regarding some deleted poem...	basit_i 161.184.193.167	31-Jan-04/1:56 PM
heh.
regarding some deleted poem...	NanceXToo 24.229.216.168	31-Jan-04/12:36 PM
oops. hadn't signed in. well anyway, i upped the vote a little. didn't wanna judge it just on the fact that it's not my style. it's still pretty cool. still think you should use a more original word than "lovely" though.
regarding some deleted poem...	NanceXToo 24.229.216.168	31-Jan-04/12:57 PM
hmm yeah, point taken.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	31-Jan-04/1:43 PM
wow
regarding some deleted poem...	basit_i 161.184.193.167	31-Jan-04/1:47 PM
yes! i relate, living nearby what is (supposedly) one of the fastest-growing (spawning?) spots in all of Canada.
regarding some deleted poem...	basit_i 161.184.193.167	31-Jan-04/1:49 PM
Image conveyed in totality. Our lives these days are filled with meaningless words--this is just right.
regarding some deleted poem...	basit_i 161.184.193.167	31-Jan-04/1:53 PM
um.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	31-Jan-04/1:57 PM
Particularly like... stock-broke potentate mummy bereft of organelles or tissue. Very stark.
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	31-Jan-04/2:03 PM
Just noticed how many times you have zeroed me and left no comment as to why. Returning the favor.
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 67.240.192.195	31-Jan-04/2:03 PM
"P.S. I dare you to check my IP" - should we have been surprised?
regarding some deleted poem...	xxx 68.165.172.185	31-Jan-04/2:11 PM
creep creep creep
regarding some deleted poem...	zodiac 67.240.192.195	31-Jan-04/2:17 PM
You have good language. For any other advice, you should read all the comments at the bottom of this page: www.poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=79015. It is, as they say, ace.
regarding some deleted poem...	Garrett S Sexton 81.131.241.42	31-Jan-04/3:10 PM
It's no lord of ya rings, but yes I LIKKED IT.
Re: Tainted by darby pyn	some deleted user 208.25.247.94	31-Jan-04/4:04 PM
i gave you a 9 i almost didnt read it but something about it cault my eye...i really like this.
Re: The Dreamer by Nicholas Jones	some deleted user 208.25.247.94	31-Jan-04/4:11 PM
practically perfect...9 sound good?
regarding some deleted poem...	forsaken'sbigbro 150.135.161.185	31-Jan-04/4:58 PM
There is more to life then just sex. Like compassion, love, a kind-heart heart, and a millions of other things you can't find just by going around having sex. NOT saying sex is a bad thing, but it's just so much better with someone you care for. I honesty couldn't tell you how many numbers I have gotten by just reading a poem I have writen at a club or something like that. Sometimes I would go against my own judgement and sleep with them, but how I wish I hadn't because now I'm more empty then when I started.
Re: ODE TO NICHOLAS JONES III by lukehanney	penguin fiend 216.207.134.6	31-Jan-04/5:32 PM
it's very clever, 7-8
regarding some deleted poem...	penguin fiend 216.207.134.6	31-Jan-04/5:34 PM
wrong, take a walk DTR
Re: Eaters of Life by Freddy	penguin fiend 216.207.134.6	31-Jan-04/5:34 PM
well, it isn't bad