[mojo]
on Frozen beauty by INTRANSIT
18 Nov 2002, 10:26 AM
You might not have known what an acrostic was ;), but you know how to write a great haiku .9.
I once ate a toilet brush for breakfast and I must say that it was the best meal i had ever had. But I did not like the toothbrush that followed. Anyway, Freddy I wish I had your talent and you wish you had my penis size. But I prefer talent to mindless, penetrative sex. What is your opinion?
you know, gouging your eyes out with a slightly tarnished soup spoon is quicker. It`s also less painful for the readers.
Whatever
Interesting
No Thanks
Yes, most excellent I think. With or without perfection.
Ok. This speaks to me of a stripper who is aware of her situation. Who might be "saved" by someone else, a male perhaps, but is comfortable and at least a little happy doing what she does in the city.
i just queefed, while cleaning out my cat's ear with my four inch pinky nail.5.
two steps forward..three steps back..listen to more of the who and get some lithium..oh, and open up your god damn curtains for christ sake.
stanzas three and four should have there last coma'd statements underneath...it looks lame extending out to the side that way..still a powerful sentiment. take this rabbit and find it a hat. 6.
superb. 8.
call this hemoglobin blues, but replace every word blood with smegma...that is all. flush!
the aroma of your lynx? (possibly brilliant) and just when i needed you mouth..is pretty extravagent also...slut. 6.
lies and abortion are bad...but dreams are a phoenix..immortal. 8.
Still the best. 9. see children if he can do it, so can you. not.
Simple words, simple scenario, simply nice. 8.
Good
Made me laugh for a few seconds