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daniella on Kindling by <~> 30 Oct 2002, 2:35 PM
fine
daniella on Poem Ranker by abecedarian 30 Oct 2002, 2:50 PM
who stole your shine?
daniella on Jackanapes and smoke buttons by Bachus 30 Oct 2002, 2:33 PM
brilliantly lewd and gruesome. what wonders would become you if you could forge a smile.
Jigg on some deleted poem 30 Oct 2002, 12:09 PM
The Welsh are a great nation, I mean it goes without saying that any country that can boast Max Boyce and Fireman Sam as custodians must desreve a poem of such magnitude as this one. Fine effort, you deserve greatness and biscuits!
Frass on Another Tragic Love Poem by greym0on 30 Oct 2002, 1:06 PM
Very strong, emotionally evocative. In stanza two, it reads awkwardly to end a line with "within" and start the next one with "in". Minor quibbles. "I'm sorry, is all that you can say..." --name that artist.
daniella on Here In The Heart of Amber by Lenore 30 Oct 2002, 2:53 PM
sounds like a hymn, here in the heart of amber...
daniella on some deleted poem 30 Oct 2002, 2:56 PM
took me there. fine, drenched and sweet.
Frass on some deleted poem 30 Oct 2002, 7:53 AM
"Little Sister don't you, LS don't you, LS don't you kiss me once or twice, say it's very nice..." but I digress. Plathensian.
Christof on some deleted poem 30 Oct 2002, 7:53 AM
'I wasn't thinking of the fame', I think it should be. Is this to do with Jackie Kennedy?
god'swife on Her Name Is Stella by Tascobar 30 Oct 2002, 7:54 AM
I thought this poem was about "On the waterfront". Works for me.
-=SeTTle=- on 25 mg by kiki 30 Oct 2002, 5:15 PM
When mental energy is concentrated, intelligence is increased. For all intents and purposes, it makes you more intelligent. You will get better grades if you take this drug. People will find you clever.
-=SeTTle=- on In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones 30 Oct 2002, 5:20 PM
Don't you have a fucking harp to go tune somewhere
god'swife on Consider The Dead by Bonehiss 30 Oct 2002, 8:34 AM
I don't dislike this poem, but it get's very cliche.
god'swife on In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones 30 Oct 2002, 8:36 AM
Lovely.
god'swife on Jackanapes and smoke buttons by Bachus 30 Oct 2002, 8:40 AM
Beautiful.
god'swife on some deleted poem 30 Oct 2002, 8:57 AM
The last stanza is the best, as far as I'm concerned. With the bums begging for sleep. This poem works. You make this task of writing look easy, and we both know it is not. The tension between the protaganists longing and his inability to become intimate, to care, startle me with the accuracy. You make me weep.
Bachus on In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones 30 Oct 2002, 9:43 AM
i liked the title and mood...i've never been much of a morning person...which is my point.6.
<~> on In the Quiet of the Night a Tree Gently Shakes by Nicholas Jones 30 Oct 2002, 7:50 AM
'sleeps slips far'--tasty!
Frass on some deleted poem 30 Oct 2002, 7:51 AM
Somehow, the Billy Preston tune "nothing from nothing leaves nothing" fits in here. Rent the movie "Pi", baba.
Bachus on George Bush, Jesus Christ, and the good ole US of A! by dougsoderstrom 30 Oct 2002, 10:03 AM
it could also just be that the little yellow bus is broke down and it's halloween...bombing is bad, saddam is also bad...hire the washington sniper put him on peyote and tell him he's on a mission from all-ah to kill saddam and replace him..to finally bring peace...amen and doug....read the old testament could you...please. thanks war! war! more war! that is all...aries has to stretch a little too...otherwise we grow nerdy as a physical people, and that my friend leads to bad breeding and deformities...good day.