daveslady
replying on Heaven Out Here by wilco
3 Jun 2004, 11:41 AM
E- First off, learn how to spell and proof read your work before submitting it and second, did you not read the poem all the way through? If you did you would have known that it wasn't about heaven being "sitting around getting tan with a beer" it was about the surrounding that God has created and how wonderful it is to enjoy them. Think about it. To enjoy the outdoors and God'd creation is "shallow"?
horus you bollox..get over the fuckin' chickens man! ..angry chickens/folded eyes...what's the difference?
you are one insecure pretentious twat...but don't worry...i have better things to do with my time than post over a squillion poems on this site in the hope of impressing my peers...tell me this my good man? have you actually ever had any work published....i bet i know the answer to this already
Exactly, so thanks, and I did write it in thirty seconds, at 1:05 in the morning.
Jesu can... Will you be supersizing your happy meal with cheese?
Look at the voting history on this poem and you'll find that it was beneath my need to vote, BUT NICE TRY!
i assume you are trying to make the worst list, so i shall help with zero.
Do you collect roadkill? I do; in fact I have the largest collection of pickled otter bums in the whole of South West London.
re: "Monotonous is King and Sorrow is his Queen."
Jesus, man! Those aren't even the same species! Just imagine all the deformed forms they would give birth to! Adjenouns! Prepoverbs! Adjunctions!!!1!
sheep sheep,
we dont wanna hear a peep,
keep it to yourself,
before i ralf
is that what them meaninf of life is to you? sitting around getting tan with a beer? and you think thats why God put you here? how shallow
wow, first, good poem as far as structure, but imagine how much better our society would be if we based our heroism on stuff that mattered? like Saints and living for God. where does rodoe get you after your dead?
This is poetry? really? don't want to hurt your feelings man, but this don't cut it, not at all. I won't vote
Perhaps you will have one of your own someday. Myself, I can't wait.
Come on, it couldn't have been that bad.
I don't understand ;)
It certaintly is, even when they're not your children! Its probably the most amazing experience that has altered my life, and hes not even mine!