some deleted user
on My Mom at her best! by Bachus
14 Dec 2003, 8:28 PM
I beat a person about the head with this printed-out text.
Nicely put...good use of the good book
good poem, i like it, 8
One of your better works.
Sounds like some tripe my demented mother would write, but what the fuck it's pretty good.
Also, really really good. 10
Really good.
good poem, 8
"buying your wife another diamond ring." What the hell does she need another one for!? I know diamonds are a girl's best friend but she should be content already with the wedding ring.
I'am flatered by your most gratus comment...may i set the mood?I'll take of B.holliday" and put on "give it away now" by t.r.hot chili pepp's.I love your verse I will borrow a bit to put light on your voyerism you have my 'perssimon' to enter the realm any time.Dizzy from the icy smoke coated player's,diamond crotches,& gold plated card pay the rent..again.Manicured widowssucking on elated but almost dead "mates".Well dressed in sin he's mothers heart does beat within he's own.He will make more $$than bin ladin,publishing he's circumcision, and yes he's beloved Jocastas jealus son /scor. A tooth like decision.So untwist the noose and chag the messenger like h. kissinger under the misttletoe. your's get's a 10 I gott to run to south beach and get my claws manicured MEEEAAOOOW, for now.
"Diamonds lost at sea" was a metaphor for the feeling the taste provoked in me.
The redundancies were intentional, I was trying to make the flow come around full circle.
Aheeemm..My brother sat me right down and he talked to me ,"about all this use me stuff" I sayd brother if y
you only knew if it feeeeels this good getting used..
you know the rest of this song...let me feeel why tough you are letting this s.o.b.use you up and how goood it feeels to you child...are you with me* 8.
You're Ming!- I know you're Ming.. the mighty!, the terrible!,..whatever.
Hello my name is walter and i'am a sheisteeer,a demon, a pshyco,an recovering assasin,a detoxed pilot of god!
"Heeey walter"..we came to beleive...yep.fa la la la la la la la happy unholydays..our men we love them so. ju
So!- to be a woman?!!---nice sense of rhythm.
Awwww girrrrll you had to go there didn't sha?That''seedy'' sermon should never touch your lips unless it was angelic revelation in c minor heh..heh..you is a lil devil.That should always have a reservation, at the very least an open one!
I like better, the one about those 2 Canadian boys(poemwankers), at Deadman's Point.
Lets have one toghether* Cheers good worck.
I dont like to think about it either but...the lobster was good, so was the stephen king..I'll drink to that!