horus8
on Jerry and Jack by eyrbare
17 Nov 2003, 5:47 PM
Why is this a sonnet?
Funny.
There's no middle ground with you is there? You're either WOT or STOP.
I think I might have seen a pantoum at the art museum today. No, I take that back. It was a Khartoum. I did see Horus though. And I'm more confused than ever. I'll get back to you on the pantoum.
Indeed.
(v)
Yes I know, I caught that too. But since you knew it was a mistake.. I hope you know what it was supposed to be :)
Pulp, squish, papyrus.
There are mistake in the last stanza L2, and S7 L1
ask scitz, or Caducus.... they might lend you one.
The leaf is not violet to start with. Not being violet it is hidden (but how does heat hide). Comes to colour in autumn. We see it.
This I think is the only way it makes sense but it is not the obvious interpretation.
Also it is a million miles from my own understanding of truth.
Other than that............
not bad.
Wish I coulda' been there
Like wise I'm sure. Do you have a picture, so I might see where it is I'm going too?
That aught ta show er.
Ouch, I've lost a few that way.
Fantastic, I haven't read any of these yet, I think I'm going to enjoy reading your stuff. Nice synopsis by the way.
Yea, I like it. I haven't been on in a week or so, but I see the top 20 has been totally revamped. I had a few make it in there in their time, I am content at that. You should do one about the anonymous tens which sometimes appear there all the sudden. Here's a blue one for this little ditty. P>S> You know, only the guys who give the 0's are going to dislike this one.