DreamerSupreme
on Soul Solitude by leviathan
9 Jul 2003, 4:54 AM
ah, another good one. ;) 10
Beatifull imagery and expression: 10
We certainly could. ;P And you can bet your ass that ill keep up the good work. I just keep getting better every Victory or Loss, thepinkbunnyofdooom is right: I am a machine. but i have alot of humanity that i have yet to unveal my lil bunny wabbit. ;P
I just went with the end results.
Advantage and self-interest.
I know we could delve much deeper and find all kinds of fun stuff and I might actually be up for it but for now I like being a conceited asshole.
(Actually it's just that like JB, I'm off to bed. Keep up the good work.)
lol, not exactly: you have a self interest in advancing your poetic ability, along with an appetite for shearing poems like musehearts. You also are quick to defend yourself considering comments and such. You also mimic somewhat a variety of poetic styles and forms of expression.
ONEFINGERANSWER = ONE-SINGLE-CUT... get it?
it takes some thinking and insight on your own self to grasp its full meanings.
My newest sword. Its black and white and curvy to take care of sharp edges. Pretty effective too. Sleep with pleasurable dreams yoda.
So what it all boils down to is I'm a conceited asshole who actually is above you, eh?
lol That's great.
Huh, that's pretty cool. Good night.
Rapscallion, eh? Heh, thanks. It means a lot coming from you. Thanks for the help along the way.
Heres the basic DMTR That I Came Up With:
OneFingerAnswer Dissected:
One
1: being a single unit or thing <one day at a time>
2a: being one in particular <early one morning>
b: being preeminently what is indicated <one fine person>
--
Finger
1: any of the five terminating members of the hand: a digit of the forelimb; especially:
one other than the thumb
2c: a projecting piece (as a pawl for a ratchet) brought into contact with an object to affect
its motion
4: INTEREST, SHEAR -- often used in the phrase have a finger in the pie
5: BIRD 10 -- usually used with the
--
Answer
2: a reply to a legal charge or suit: PLEA; also: DEFENSE (these two words dont need dissection)
3: something done in response or reaction
5: one that imitates, matches, or corresponds to another
--
Secondary Dissections:
interest
3 : ADVANTAGE, BENEFIT; also : SELF-INTEREST
5 a : a feeling that accompanies or causes special attention to an object or class of
objects: CONCERN (Dissection not required)
--
shear
1 : to cut through something with or as if with a sharp instrument
--
bird
7 (chiefly British) [a]: a hissing or jeering expressive of disapproval
--
Final Dissections:
advantage
1: superiority of position or condition
--
self-interest
1: a concern for one's own advantage and well-being
[Benefit i felt wasnt needed in the dissection.]
You have come a long way my friend, and you have earned every moment. GOLDEN QUE TIP awarde, for having more heart than a rapscallion poet deserves. I like how you only put in the commas and allowed your capitalization to accentuate starts and stops, a fine piece, very handsome.
I know this broad is too much, every poet alive is bipolar, I'm bipolar with major drug addiction, coupled by male prostitution, no fucking money, shitty friends and family, a compulsive cleaning disorder, insomnia, alchoholism, and bisexuallity with acute sexual identity problems, not to mention paranoia, and an Oedipus complex the size of Madrid, and she's whining. I thought poets functioned better against these kinds of odds?
Nah. Its aight man. Ill survive without it. Btw, im getting to work on your Dictionary Magic Test Result DMTR. Hey.. we should have this programmed damn it, and have it on the website!! would be a cool idea.
What happens then? Do you start writing poetry that isn't shit? In that case here's another nudge, cut your face next time to remind you and your type that life is worth more then a trip down the aisle, or to the pharmacy, or to an abortion clinic, or too a dear Aunts funeral. Poetry, is more then your speck of dust is shinier than mine, you hack.
Well what do you want me to do about it? It's not like I can do it here. All you have to do is get AIM and you can see what it is. I'll even let you use one of my dead accounts to log on.
Dude, take him up on this. He helped me before and it's worth it. Plus he's a hottie. :o
I'm kidding about the hottie thing but really he's what you want. Someone who knows what they're talking about and won't bull shit you about it. He's not hampered by styles or subject matter either. He and I don't write anything alike most of the time and he still did a great job.
bah. ;P
I wanted too let you know, that I didn't think your poetry was totally hopeless earlier, (it is frightfully young and sensitive) but I would be willing to teach you, some will warn you not to trust me (because they will be jealous),and because I am Grendal, I am offering you this opportunity because I went and read a bit about you on your home page and we have some of the same interests. I also would rather see you have a passion for writing and living rather than feeling resentful of who you are or how you percieve the world around you. I found that you were interesting and would be willing to have you as my apprentice.
Oh well. I tried. Guess you'll never know.
my AIM isnt aol related. ;/ dont got aim, old history explaination: a hate of aol. ;x