Agemo-Z
replying on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
9 Dec 2002, 6:14 PM
If you've got "a line of credit into the astrosphere earned with... writing", why don't you point us towards some of your published poetry? Or any of your published work, for that matter?
Please tell me you are joking. Yes, yes, you are poking fun.
thanks for your help...but is this what you meant - Please let me know as I really do value your opinion. I've meant to get to this sooner... but sometimes i get overwhelmed and consistently curse myself for not taking more time for myself and others...'till next time. Is Adonis lofting above your family tree or are you the ressurection of its body and soul?
i hope your still waiting...legs spread, fragrant mist, embraced. Thanks for the drug induced sentiments laced with translucent afterthoughts of the next time.
-=SeTTle=-
on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
9 Dec 2002, 4:58 PM
1, these are haiku plural 2, i wrote a poem about you and i'd be honored if you read it which is to say i won't stop bothering you until you do because i love you and i want to have tons of babies with you and nobody but you and live with you etcetcetcwergfcerfderdfefd the damn thing scratched me as i was installinig a cat door
poetandknowit
on Dear Mr. Poetry, could you hold my purse? <how does babbit do it> by horus8
9 Dec 2002, 4:58 PM
This is # ten. Ten poems written in my lovely honor. Come on Bacchus. You are a pretty boy; a hit with all the ladies, do not be jealous. Just look at what the hard knock life has brought you: the talent to ramble (sometimes in decent fashion) and call it new and inspiring and saying anyone who questions the Henry Rollins style lacks depth or imagination or is not hip with the underground. The "subbacultcha." To learn to digest prison food properly. To drop names of actors that no one has ever heard of. Go find an acting job, slam the night away at the coffee shop, play your Tuesday night gigs and starve in honor the fact that you my friend are a true "artist" and me, with a wall of degrees, and a line of credit into the astrosphere earned with (yes, you guessed it) writing just doesn't "understand". There is art there. There is. Yes. Yes.
Bachus
on Excommunication by inch of candle - Jesus wants me for a bum ream. An narrative in so many verses that madam palms readings have been savarlay curtailed by ==Doylum
9 Dec 2002, 4:35 PM
sheer evil. i will go now and count my pennies. i have no thoughts, BUT I STILL HAVE THE STAFF OF RELIEF! it would be funny if we could get christopher walken to read it..wow the image is nucleur. have a 9.
tell that to sir paul's wife! ha!
oh come on. don't exaggerate..."would you care for one waifer thin mint".
on the other hand, i do know bachus alot, and horus8 a little.
Well let's see it started pretty badly, it tailed off in the middle and the less said about the end the better but on teh whole quite quite brilliant, well done ahmyerda, well done have a biscuit, or don't. Nae cunt likes a fat arsehole
So what? Well, that is about it.
Good stuff all the way through and hearing it read was quite nice. Line 2, 3, 4 are top notch. One of the few poems here, along with the Chistof one about the fox, that are truly effective on another level away from the pimple shit and workshop wannabe muck.
interview well, do we.
excellent.
can one eat papadum with mexican food? the slasa's all wrong, i know... okay, throw in some onion, mint, and tamarind chutneys for appetizers, and i hope you brought the fixings for hot fudge sundaes!