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bxjay170 on Dilemma of a Crip by Ninoy_Instigator 11 Nov 2002, 8:19 PM
good sh1!t gansta keep rolling lets keep it gansta at this site 1
whats this?
Limness on Kindling by <~> 11 Nov 2002, 6:41 PM
what is up with the zeros? are you dead inside?
<~> replying on Bleeding V2 by INTRANSIT 11 Nov 2002, 6:03 PM
guys always like them rock n' roll chix now don't they. what would you use for a mantra if you were feeling a tad more percussive? try "cicada cicada cicada" and, if it suits you, you can bury yourself for 7 years or so, unless i happen to dig you up and force you to sing for me, as a summer bug should....damn you--get away from my morning glories
<~> on echoes by brazen 11 Nov 2002, 6:00 PM
i think you force the rhyme at the expence of the experience in this one brazen. sorry for that.
horus8 on Bleeding V2 by INTRANSIT 11 Nov 2002, 5:58 PM
i never scan.. i read than hop around naked going "fiji" "fiji"...i was interested straight through...it might just be heart singing barracuda in the background...that song always makes me smile though aint that the truth.9.
<~> on Handy Smurf by Bachus 11 Nov 2002, 5:58 PM
how'd he get that name anyway....hmmm
<~> on A Green Moons Haze by pink_punk_kisses87 11 Nov 2002, 5:57 PM
almost there.... but jigsaw aren't jagged (shattered, whatever) even though they are confusing and in a thousand pieces. dammit man! (woman)! you are a tease. shape this up. the bit about the haze seeping closer to your heart is eerily brilliant, damn you. i demand a rewrite.
<~> on There is no end by INTRANSIT 11 Nov 2002, 5:55 PM
hmmm, my bruises were never as pretty as pink (bless you for not knowing that???!) nor have i ever seen grey jis...as for the bad seed, yes, amen to that. but who what when where why...or at least how? i like to watch....even it if it's only on the ranker. you'll not get a vote from me until i get some salient details, sirrah!
again, you fuck me here in public. should i be blushing? have a nine.
<~> replying on I Respect Your Feelings As A Woman And A Human by -=SeTTle=- 11 Nov 2002, 5:11 PM
and i mean that based on the general tone of your prior entries...up until you were struck, it seems, by the urge to l-o-v-e. you have not grown into the argot as yet.
<~> replying on I Respect Your Feelings As A Woman And A Human by -=SeTTle=- 11 Nov 2002, 5:09 PM
true, but coming from you it seem like mockery. if it is true, blessing to you and yours. if not, see above.
Bachus replying on Gloria's stairwell circles up & down by Bachus 11 Nov 2002, 4:00 PM
on re-reading your comment. i unfortunately and thoroughly saddened must agree. oh..well. there's always barry manilow and a good porte' ow grof.
Bachus on Goodbye by Nicholas Jones 11 Nov 2002, 3:45 PM
and the brethren say satasfactory. i don't care for you as a human being, because your not yet, but i will buy you a beer after work one day..so here. i enjoyed reading it on all the levels that count in the attic across the street from you...here i'll flash my light twice to proof it.2
INTRANSIT on Goodbye by Nicholas Jones 11 Nov 2002, 3:37 PM
I'll come back to this a couple of times before I number it.
Bachus on echoes by brazen 11 Nov 2002, 3:31 PM
great last line, but second stanza last line "horizon" and or hori-zen which could be better, but since you don't have any other hyphens going on any where else it wouldn't look that good i guess...interesting notion though...just forget everything i said..i'm stoned and squandering my time unwisely again...has anyone seen a better manager or agent floating around here..i need a new one. bad.
-=SeTTle=- on Contempt by Britpop 11 Nov 2002, 3:28 PM
She was an ugly woman, almost as ugly as her ex-husband. This whole scandal is just a way for the British people to forget about the twat that they elected priminister.
There's more to life than poontang. There is a love so profound that even poetry can only hint at it.
brazen on The little tornado that could by Bachus 11 Nov 2002, 2:59 PM
nothing pulls you from a "i just woke up and feel like shit" bout of depression better then destruction of a white trash town. well, that and morning head.
Bachus on i miss you by bxjay170 11 Nov 2002, 1:25 PM
the word "holping" does seem to offer a bit of hope so can you holp me holp you holp yourself. you're fired. next.A