Tarquin De La Bog
on Weep for Dead Heroes by Tascobar
9 Oct 2002, 3:23 AM
Succinctly put. 7. I like the title and particularly the rhyming of the first and second lines; rare to see in a haiku.
Succinctly put. 7. I like the title and particularly the rhyming of the first and second lines; rare to see in a haiku.
Nice poem, I guess I've felt this way myself once....
Not bad... Kind of deep.... I like it
Ambiguous Love Poem for a Girl I Never Knew.
Write me one of these.
yeah...i knew what you were saying...but i was thinking about some people. no hits were coming though. don't worry. i'm done pissing for the night
Successful today, not way back when...sorry, I saw the hits coming a mile away on that one.
i got the gist..but yeah i was gonna say...no hits were cominig however...ok now i'm really gone.
awesome. have a good one dude. do some work. night
We were never not cool.
truer words were never spoken. so are we cool?
Of course, you think it is good. Because it is good. It is just young and it is blowing away its intended audience. But how many successful writers are 19 or 20? There is a reason for that. Experience. It may be a cliche, it may be a stereotype, but it is everything. She has the tools and the talent. The rest with come with age.
His. Yes. But mostly his novels and short stories, but he is a damn good poet also.
when i started talking about my teenage friends and adult friends i was talking about my poetry...not limonade's
one last thought before i leave...it's funny how you say that limonade's poetry has a young...or "undergrad" feel to it...because the vast majority of my teenage friends think it's great but most of my adult friends say the same kind of stuff you guys do. guess i'll just have to grow up before i can write really good stuff like you and god'swife...once again...no sarcasm. night all
gone to bed. thanks for reading them over. hope to chat soon.
well sad to say...i need sleep. i have a class in six hours. but thank you for helping me release some anger on a faceless foe...no sarcasm there. i needed to rant. good night to you and god'swife.
they were written for my girlfriend at the time...not a good stage in my life...for love or poetry...as you can probably tell
is his stuff well known?