on Untitled by unknown
21 Aug 2002, 10:47 PM
Not personally my taste in poems, bu tI'm not really a romantic :)
on tears beyond hope by Mystifying
21 Aug 2002, 9:31 PM
Spelling isnt that bad, but the subject is cliche. Sounds like a pop song/nursery rhyme. It's a whole lot better than the other poems here in the worst section, though
on cold sonnet by <~>
21 Aug 2002, 3:53 PM
It's like I can see it. Good job :)
on Bizarre Practices by longships
20 Aug 2002, 10:16 PM
I'd have to agree... Rhyming can be used tastefully and rhythmically, and it can be overused. It sounds like a 3rd grade song that you use to sing while jumping rope.