on The Journal by 1Sapphire1
4 Oct 2002, 7:38 AM
I like the situation and the heart-break
on Truths by Nicholas Jones
4 Oct 2002, 7:08 AM
Oh, a typo - 'ecomic'
on The silent moon by UAFANTHORPEY
3 Oct 2002, 7:30 AM
Is this a song lyric? For some reason it sounds like one
on boom by UAFANTHORPEY
3 Oct 2002, 7:29 AM
I don't see the UA Fanthorpe connection either, but I do see Shaggy.
on Poem #5 (of a series of poems for Boo) by Owner of the Sky
2 Oct 2002, 8:15 AM
Lovely, just one typo- 'autumn'. I like the last four lines especially.
on some deleted poem
4 Oct 2002, 7:25 AM
What is this wut?
on Farewell Song by jaalko
4 Oct 2002, 7:32 AM
I think you're right, this is by far not the worst thing on poemranker.
on Thanksgiving Dream Sequence by Venus
3 Oct 2002, 3:09 AM
Great stuff - reality, fantasy, pain, recognition.
on some deleted poem
4 Oct 2002, 7:36 AM
It's 'post-self-coital' - so this is surely masturbatory? You'll go blind, you know.
on Endymion Dead by vulcan
4 Oct 2002, 5:21 AM
Keats this time? A good and concise response.
on Sonnet For a Porn Star by mikejedw
4 Oct 2002, 5:23 AM
I think the third quatrain lets this poem down a bit; it seems to reduce rather than express her pain. But the couplet is a killer. Well done.
on Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones
4 Oct 2002, 7:01 AM
Yes that is better - tighter.
on Truths by Nicholas Jones
4 Oct 2002, 7:07 AM
Very good - the dilemma of the socialist faced with New Labour. What a middle-class and furtive party it is now. Which is why I always vote Liberal Democrat - as if that's any great alternative.
on Possibilities by Nicholas Jones
4 Oct 2002, 7:05 AM
The proverbial embarrassment of riches. I'd start with Stockport.
on Suburbia in December by Nicholas Jones
3 Oct 2002, 7:32 AM
An little element of comedy in the middle (the people's non-superficial injuries)- i'd like to see more of that. I wonder if you need the last two lines? The atmosphgere of this I like
on Temptation Stings, Midday Nashville by <~>
3 Oct 2002, 7:37 AM
Can you get me a rhinestone cowboy suit while you're there? A white one with a big hat? Thanks.
on Ode to Molly by knickytoy
3 Oct 2002, 7:41 AM
I like this, 'wittle' and all, but what's naugahyde? You have a habit of writing poems referring to things I've heard of!
on some deleted poem
2 Oct 2002, 7:57 AM
I have these dreams too. It would so liven up the city.
on On The Bench Outside Gruhn's Guitars by <~>
3 Oct 2002, 7:40 AM
Short and sweet.