on some deleted poem
21 Aug 2002, 3:49 AM
Who is this poem directed at? I have a lot of respect for poems which are ambiguous or vague or obscure but this poem goes a bit too far. However l really like your structure, it creates an "in your mind" perspective.
on A Nightmare by Dreamer
21 Aug 2002, 11:23 AM
Do you find murder melodramatic? The poem is not really good but its not bloody daisies or sunsets. I mean my God, if anything my poem does not at all portray the reality of the amount of PAIN and SUFFERING.
on Northern Ireland by longships
21 Aug 2002, 3:55 AM
I really like this poem. You portray the situation brilliantly and also the frustration at not being able to conceive such inhumanity. See "The Curse". It is along the same lines, sort of!
on some deleted poem
21 Aug 2002, 3:40 AM
Not a very original title.