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on You wash up, I forget. by Bachus 28 May 2004, 12:19 PM
the luminous drifting from room to room carrying thoughts in tow. ruminating like a fat hamster on a plastic wheel........waiting for the right moment to jump off. and who ever does.

giving inanimate objects life is so feckin' glorious.
"medicine cabinet's mirror"...........all it was...was a comma but i felt my fingerprint on the glass.

j.