replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
11 Apr 2006, 1:25 PM
You're calmbering bearded on some other clambake.
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
11 Apr 2006, 1:11 PM
At this moment I have a beard
I have no idea what that should mean
It's invisible except in a magnifying mirror
Fuzzy insipient fur
Useful as male nipples
To an atheist - ignored
I have no idea what that should mean
It's invisible except in a magnifying mirror
Fuzzy insipient fur
Useful as male nipples
To an atheist - ignored
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
11 Apr 2006, 12:55 PM
"Dovina's smugness": I suppose it's because I used a smug rooster for comparison, and called myself a hen. Perhaps I should have explained that they are animals incapable of human reasoning, and that I used them as metaphors for possible incapabilities of humans. We just might be incapable of certain undefined mental processes that go beyond our treasured logical abilities. Smug? - Yes, I suppose it is in an unknown way.
on Letting go by Caducus
11 Apr 2006, 12:45 PM
I almost laughed at the ending - the old-time style of it. The rest has some pretty good lines, but I don't think the funny spacing helps.
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
10 Apr 2006, 7:25 PM
Both are incomprehensible, speaking as a hen.
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
10 Apr 2006, 7:15 PM
How do you beard an invisible guy?
on Narcolepsy by Sunny
10 Apr 2006, 7:11 PM
I think it’s best to avoid the “there is” construction, especially at the beginning. Try, “Red sky peers through the shutters.” Maybe you really mean “Shudders” but I find it difficult.
Also, it’s a bit wordy. Try “He nods off
to my tense afterthoughts” in S2, for example. Many phrases can be shortened and thereby made stronger.
At first his uncontrollable urge to sleep, per the title, came through, but the meaning faded til the end.
Also, it’s a bit wordy. Try “He nods off
to my tense afterthoughts” in S2, for example. Many phrases can be shortened and thereby made stronger.
At first his uncontrollable urge to sleep, per the title, came through, but the meaning faded til the end.
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
10 Apr 2006, 5:49 PM
Yeah, it's the science-touting, logic-claiming atheists who shoot their own feet. You'd think they'd have learned from a thousand years of science that some of the most preposterous-sounding propositions turn true. Raise a glass to the ones who don’t throw out the impossible, who go where no one has gone. Raise a glass to God. Tell me if I’m getting carried away.
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
10 Apr 2006, 5:22 PM
I forgot to say thanks. Thanks.
replying on Maybe I Wasn’t Born on a Fool’s Day by Dovina
10 Apr 2006, 4:09 PM
When John Henry was a little baby
sittin' on his mama's knee
he picked up a hammer and a little piece of steel
said "this hammer's gonna be the death of me
Lord, Lord
this hammer's gonna be the death of me"
- a folk song I used to sing in college.
sittin' on his mama's knee
he picked up a hammer and a little piece of steel
said "this hammer's gonna be the death of me
Lord, Lord
this hammer's gonna be the death of me"
- a folk song I used to sing in college.
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
10 Apr 2006, 3:57 PM
I did enjoy it. But I think it's poorly written. That would be alright, but it also takes a certain predefined view of God, which makes your gift kind of like a necktie that somebody gave you, and you didn't like, and now seeing my April Fool's Day birthday has passed, you have giftwrapped it for me. That's ok, it's the thought that counts.
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
10 Apr 2006, 2:58 PM
"I have great faith in human ingenuity to comprehend.": Isn't that a bit like a rooster strutting about the henhouse, obviously thinking he's the smartest thing going, and will soon have all the perplexities of his surroundings figured out? I'm not calling your intelligence that of a rooster. It just seems that faith in human ability has a parallel in animal's faith in their abilities.
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
9 Apr 2006, 8:32 PM
It’s funny. I can believe something without sound reason. It just seems right, so I go with it. It’s almost scary sometimes. I base critical decisions on unfounded beliefs. Today, I drove through a green light because I trusted drivers coming at right angle to stop. I did this at least thirty times, believing that people I have never met will do the right thing. I based my life on a belief in what usually happens.
If I had never driven through a green light, I might respond more cautiously. I might stop until no car was approaching on a collision course. Trouble is, we have to keep trucking, most of the time, and only what feels right works in the moment. So, by habit, I suppose, I look at all the reasons for God and for not-God and, finding no clear logical answer, proceed onward with a feeling that has worked on an emotional level. I think sometimes that’s all we get.
If I had never driven through a green light, I might respond more cautiously. I might stop until no car was approaching on a collision course. Trouble is, we have to keep trucking, most of the time, and only what feels right works in the moment. So, by habit, I suppose, I look at all the reasons for God and for not-God and, finding no clear logical answer, proceed onward with a feeling that has worked on an emotional level. I think sometimes that’s all we get.
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
9 Apr 2006, 7:29 PM
lol
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
9 Apr 2006, 6:42 PM
I knew there was no point. I'm bored. So long.
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
9 Apr 2006, 6:38 PM
A chicken can ask, "Why am I here in this cage, being fed?" with about as much capability of getting an answer as we can ask, "Why am I here?" In either case, even if the one in charge gives an answer, the one in the cage is not likely to understand it.
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
9 Apr 2006, 6:24 PM
Most recently, discussing April Fools's Day.
replying on The Battle of Fort Bragg by Dovina
9 Apr 2006, 6:21 PM
I do not mean to bring spiritual experience into it either. On that I agree with him.
Your arguments have not been condescending or smug, which I appreciate. I think you place too much faith in human logic, but that's an acedemic proposition, not a criticism.