on some deleted poem
8 Sep 2004, 2:00 PM
You asked for me to comment on something so here we go. I was always a fan of the "I can't have this person" type stuff, call me a sucker for it. Nice. Sweet. To the Point. Not that I'm anyone special to be giving critique on other's work. I like it.
on some deleted poem
8 Sep 2004, 2:10 PM
Waiting is always the hardest part. Insecurity. Not having closure, good or bad. Excellent expression of this. Good job :D
on The Frontman of a Band Called Joe by MacFrantic
8 Sep 2004, 2:19 PM
I won't vote on this because poems that I like I tend to hand out 8's to. But whether or not the world's 8 is the same is mine, well I don't know. But I will say that I like this. Reminds me of the stuff you'd find in Cobain's journal.
-Linty of Weenis's