on Remembrance by Caducus
11 Nov 2004, 5:31 AM
absolutely divine, for every time we remember, they die again. As one who lost his brother in nam, I truly appreciate this...thank you
replying on Ebony shadow by Twiggy77
10 Nov 2004, 11:32 AM
actually as a child in school, I said very little, and yeah I did wear the dunce cap a few times, and kicked little snotty ass boys like you up and down the football field for an outlet, then found out that writing was better. As for your hatred towards the islamic faith, how christian of you, my next door neighbor is a muslim and probably the nicest family I've ever met, happy hating
replying on Ebony shadow by Twiggy77
10 Nov 2004, 9:56 AM
too easy, when you are born, you know nothing, therefore it's learned....I see you have also learned good people skills, your parents must truly be proud
on Ebony shadow by Twiggy77
10 Nov 2004, 8:34 AM
sentenced, but other than that, twas good, especially the last stanza, only we allow the lessons of life to teach us to hate, as I'm a firm believer that hate is learned behavior.....
replying on A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman
10 Nov 2004, 7:56 AM
your points to the literary criticisms are well taken and I totally agree, it's the other bullshit comments that are so unnecessary, and I seriously doubt many would even venture into my neighborhood, let alone try to slap me, but be my guest......so now that that's said lets get back to writing
replying on A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman
10 Nov 2004, 5:02 AM
Thank you, you guys have so much ettiquette when addressing people that you don't even know, the monitor and distance must really be a source of comfort for bravery, hopefully you don't write like you talk....ignorant
on A Child Learns (haiku) by poetryman
9 Nov 2004, 3:23 PM
The Japanese, who were the true originators of writing Haiku, considered children as the highest form of nature. Read Ho-Chu
on Remembrance by dragonfly
8 Nov 2004, 4:40 PM
very nice, a loved one never really leaves us for they remain close to our hearts and memories....Bob:)