replying on Life by AmberDawn
2 Feb 2005, 1:33 PM
Not mean at all, I appreciate an honest person. Do you know anywhere that has a more friendly, helpful cast of users?
on First date (for Larry, a lesbian vampire) by Bachus
2 Feb 2005, 12:01 PM
I was definitely not expecting that at the end, but the poem is great. It left me wishing there was more to it.
I wrote this poem when I was 15, I submitted it hoping that I would recieve helpful criticism. The spelling errors are due to my putting the poem in while at work, therefore on a time restriction. Any comments that will actually help would be appreciated. Otherwise, thanks for nothing.