on The Chocolat Box by Samantha
7 Mar 2005, 7:26 PM
um this was weak at best, and only managed to work at all because it was supported by an outside quote - 5 -
on What went wrong with America? (An essay) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
7 Mar 2005, 7:28 PM
i couldnt even be bothered to read this - this site is for poetry not essay - 5 because it looks like you might have put effort in any way
-emili
-emili
on Tales of Woah (Episode #1 Corp. Shin Shines) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
9 Mar 2005, 4:29 PM
alot of your work tends to be good but it is extremely long and exhausting to read - might i suggest making it a bit shorter - it would be more effective and i bet more people would read it
-emili
-emili
on some deleted poem
9 Mar 2005, 4:36 PM
ah, but have you yet considered the chance that history man never see you,
how many people have you heard from 18th century france, or 11th century africa
exactly
how many people have you heard from 18th century france, or 11th century africa
exactly
on Bottleneck by Cha no Onna
3 Apr 2005, 11:12 AM
?
on Love Spoke by MistressSnow
6 Apr 2005, 9:55 AM
im not a fan of rhyming and lines 34 & 36 don't even rhyme..
on In Due Time by DeadtotheWorld
14 Apr 2005, 1:30 PM
this is almost too weird but not quite