poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Dental Panic (81-100)

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on Bookends by INTRANSIT 16 May 2005, 3:13 PM
I'm not going to vote on poetry, ever - but I like this one. It's a bit hypographic and you should buy O'Hara.
on Transition by INTRANSIT 18 May 2005, 11:56 PM
I don't think haiku should have something to give away. The universe is not to be tricked. Then again, I don't have a real taste for haiku. They're a bit like sushi to me - I'll aways look around for more.
on Coffined by Dovina 26 May 2005, 2:33 PM
It's a poem about sloth, I think. But there's to much poet in it. Lose the voice, show the scene.
on some deleted poem 26 May 2005, 8:00 PM
Sorry. I accidently deleted a comment by Dovina. You asked about the third line.
Calaveras is the name for the sweet skulls the mexicans use at the day of the dead. They’re made of powder sugar, eggwhite, honey and vanilla. They’re painted with bright colors and a persons name is written on them. They’re meant to welcome the dead back in the homes of their loved ones.
I hope this explains the image of the empty chairs.