poemranker ::20 most recent comments by andrew barnes

Comments byandrew barnes, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on some deleted poem 22 May 2005, 12:23 PM
Yep, I think the phrase "Masturbatory madness" just about sums it up.
on Bilateral by Hadasl 21 May 2005, 12:22 PM
Liked the title.....interesting rhyming scheme but found the rhymes themselves too obvious. Content seemed unfocused.... obvious passion but was this written for the reader or the author ?
on Cardiovascular workout formula by abi 21 May 2005, 12:25 PM
Quite jolly ! Even for a comic piece the repetition of "go" in lines 5 and 6 is iritating !
on some deleted poem 22 May 2005, 12:35 PM
Fell asleep