Comments byALChemy, 741–760 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on Racial Hate by Glasseyez 29 Jan 2006, 11:32 AM
That's great but I'm afraid after doing some research I discovered that it turns out when the American Indian first migrated here they weren't the first. The Asians had been there first. They had populated most of the continent.
So the Indians Just killed them all and took over.

So it turns out what man is and what he thinks he is are usaully not quite the same thing.
on How small, this sleeping tiger by ecargo 29 Jan 2006, 11:08 AM
Yes and please check out my poem "Penny Loafer Blues".

Your poems good but it feels like it needs more, like it's just getting started.
replying on Racial Hate by Glasseyez 29 Jan 2006, 10:08 AM
So everything in nature isn't equal or of equal importance?
replying on Racial Hate by Glasseyez 29 Jan 2006, 9:49 AM
Oh, Ok. I think I know what you mean now. I'm part American Indian and for thousands of years they have lived without racism not only because of their simularities but because they believed everything is equally important in nature. Am I on the right track?
replying on Sky All Around Me (goddess edit) by ecargo 29 Jan 2006, 7:12 AM
Unless it's in a perfect vacuum with absolute zero gravity then nothing will go straight.
From http://www.findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m1134/is_n1_v106/ai_19318730

"The action of a gravitational lens is not restricted to visible light. If light takes the shortest distance through space-time between two points (which it does), and if space-time itself is curved (which it is), then the path of light will curve along with it, regardless of whether the light is composed of gamma rays, X-rays, ultraviolet, infrared, microwaves, or radio waves. And, most importantly, the cosmic stuff that causes the bending can be made of absolutely anything, as long as it contains enough mass to curve space-time measurably in its vicinity."


"There are no straight lines in nature, only areas of color one against another." - Monet

on Racial Hate by Glasseyez 29 Jan 2006, 6:26 AM
What color is the heart again? http://tuberose.com/Graphics/Bypass%20surgery1.gif
Blood is red usually but of different shades.
If you think I'm nitpicking you're right, which is my point. Although yes we are the same on a grander scale, we are also different in little ways. We have evolved to become sensetive to these tiny differences so that we can better identify each other(so you don't go hugging every old man you see on the street and calling him grandpappy). Racism is just an unfortunate biproduct of an essential evolutionary trait. Maybe if geneticists learn how to turn blacks white or whites black then we'll all be better off but I doubt it.
replying on Just Shut Up! Everyone Just Shut Up! by MacFrantic 29 Jan 2006, 5:44 AM
This is who he is, enjoy: http://www.poemranker.com/user-browse.jsp?id=67896
http://rockmage.com/
on For such is a child’s heart by amanda_dcosta 29 Jan 2006, 5:34 AM
Change the first line to: "The children play in the field."
replying on Us Sinners by BrandonW 29 Jan 2006, 5:27 AM
You count the syllables not the words.
In/ hea/ven. I/ just/ hope/ that/
1----2---3---4---5-----6------7

Zodiac won't go to heaven or hell. He'll just die, as all atheists do. You'll recognise me when you get to heaven. I'll be the one God hired to clean the bathrooms.
replying on Round 27 by Dovina 28 Jan 2006, 10:10 AM
There's a glitch at dictionary.com were if you type "nave" and hit the search button the definition for "naive" sometimes pops up. Sometimes you have to do it a few times for it to work.

So it was kinda my own little private joke.
on After Fighting (More Blood Edit) by zodiac 27 Jan 2006, 9:29 AM
You chose to use "dog" for atheism, am I right?

Has he stopped fighting yet?

I'd change lopped to lobbed.

There's nothing wrong with being atheist
as long as you're not afraid of death.
on Round 27 by Dovina 27 Jan 2006, 5:14 AM
You should make this into something more. It needs bookends.
replying on Round 27 by Dovina 27 Jan 2006, 5:12 AM
Well I was going to give you two 4s but I still haven't figured out how that trick is done.
replying on Round 27 by Dovina 27 Jan 2006, 5:09 AM
Eight is enough.
replying on Round 27 by Dovina 27 Jan 2006, 5:09 AM
Well how nave of me.
on Round 27 by Dovina 26 Jan 2006, 7:33 PM
Smart sounding words.
Sounds mostly like an excerpt from a sociology book.
replying on Round 27 by Dovina 26 Jan 2006, 7:27 PM
What 2 meanings of nave do you mean?
on You. by Sway 26 Jan 2006, 6:24 AM
Good but lose the rhymes or find better ones.
on Oblivion by Sway 26 Jan 2006, 4:56 AM
Good but common.
replying on Tree of Life by ALChemy 26 Jan 2006, 4:46 AM
Just the image of seeing a birch in winter that appears to be filled with pretty red leaves and then realizing they're a large flock of cardinals as they fly off.