replying on Submission by Dovina
17 Nov 2005, 8:55 AM
Damn! I would have loved to hear his response to that.
replying on Submission by Dovina
17 Nov 2005, 8:53 AM
No it's not about you. Egoboy.
replying on Submission by Dovina
17 Nov 2005, 8:08 AM
I thought a certain person (who I will not name) was the inspiration for the computer metaphor. He has confessed his emotionlessness to some degree.
If you start to read it in this way you can see how it made me go "Whoa! Wow!"
Another word for egg is "ovi". Now take "ovi" out of "DoviNA".
If you start to read it in this way you can see how it made me go "Whoa! Wow!"
Another word for egg is "ovi". Now take "ovi" out of "DoviNA".
on Submission by Dovina
17 Nov 2005, 7:37 AM
Is it just for him or all of us hardware men?
You carried that metaphor all the way through like a tightrope walker. Do the 4 attitudes have different screen names? If so dare I ask for their names so I can read their poetry too. Call me a silly romantic but I really can't help but think of it as a love poem.
You inspired another little poem out of me:
It came to me one cold winters day
to take the egg out of Dovina and make DNA.
It may just be because think I actually get all of this one that I feel giddy enough to give you -10-.
You carried that metaphor all the way through like a tightrope walker. Do the 4 attitudes have different screen names? If so dare I ask for their names so I can read their poetry too. Call me a silly romantic but I really can't help but think of it as a love poem.
You inspired another little poem out of me:
It came to me one cold winters day
to take the egg out of Dovina and make DNA.
It may just be because think I actually get all of this one that I feel giddy enough to give you -10-.
replying on There is a journey tree by ALChemy
17 Nov 2005, 6:48 AM
Thanks. I never got around to saying for obvious reasons that your poems have that same sense of flow. I think we both tend to lean towards the musical effect of poetry. I bet you'd appreciate the works of E.A. Poe. He was really my introduction into poetry.
replying on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy
17 Nov 2005, 5:38 AM
I bet you are cute, Shorty.
replying on The Gate of Heaven by TLRufener
17 Nov 2005, 5:35 AM
Are you still?
See it's kinda fun DS.
See it's kinda fun DS.
replying on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9
17 Nov 2005, 5:30 AM
I hope we are. I'll try not to leave anymore comments on your poems if you promise to be a little more patient with us "teenagers" (by the way I'm 32). OK? Deal?
replying on Us Sinners by BrandonW
17 Nov 2005, 5:15 AM
Now I've just got to see that movie again.
replying on Us Sinners by BrandonW
17 Nov 2005, 5:14 AM
Yes.
Um Dovina if you're reading this don't be mad. He's comparing you to a beautiful woman with huge lovely natural breasts. I could not describe a perfect woman better.
Um Dovina if you're reading this don't be mad. He's comparing you to a beautiful woman with huge lovely natural breasts. I could not describe a perfect woman better.
replying on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9
17 Nov 2005, 5:08 AM
Just hit the red x to delete it. Stop burning bridges. Sometimes people just need to get a feel for what you're trying to do in your poem. As an artist I under stand how frustrating it is when people don't get what you're trying to do. So they just tell you the truth about what they got from the poem. Be patient you're new, they'll catch on.
replying on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9
17 Nov 2005, 4:57 AM
I totally understand what you mean D. This comment of yours was a total waste of time.
replying on Beneath the Willow Tree by cyan9
16 Nov 2005, 7:44 PM
Thanks for the info. It should come in handy.