on What's my favorite scar. by darby pyn
1 Jul 2005, 12:21 PM
Very well written.
on some deleted poem
2 Jul 2005, 1:16 PM
Love it.
on The Bastardization of Hypocrisy by Bluemonkey
5 Jul 2005, 1:27 PM
I cant see the relevance of the title to the verse.
on The sunset sea. by darby pyn
21 Jul 2005, 4:04 PM
I like the depth of your work Darby.
on SO DON'T GIVE UP ON YOUR LOVE by prettyktm
22 Jul 2005, 9:42 AM
Sorry to say this, but I think its boring. It flows nicely etc, but the content is the same drivel I've heard a thousand times before. Perhaps look at the subject from a different angle.
on Stabbed with a Carrot by T. Jonathron Remp
25 Jul 2005, 3:09 AM
7 for the comedy value, and the adverse spiritual affects. You poor soul...!